POEM: Emily Dickinson’s [465]

[465]

I heard a Fly buzz—when I died—
The Stillness in the Room
Was like the Stillness in the Air—
Between the Heaves of Storm—

The Eyes around—had wrung them dry—
And Breaths were gathering firm
For that last Onset—when the King
Be witnessed—in the Room—

I willed my Keepsakes—signed away
What portions of me be
Assignable—and then it was
There interposed a Fly—

With Blue—uncertain stumbling Buzz—
Between the light—and me—
And then the Windows failed—and then
I could not see to see—

Emily Dickinson

Two Poems from Malachi Black’s “Quarantine”

Having been impressed by the simplicity and polish of Poetry Foundation’s electronic application for iPhone, and also the compendium of poems they fix to most authors in their full database, I’d been haunting the .org for a good part of the morning. Malachi Black’s name has, of course, the Fellow connection for me, so, seeing a piece from him in Poetry’s May issue, I surfed past my stack of Hopkins correspondence (and past the thump of TV on the Radio’s recent Nine Types of Light) to two pieces from “Quarantine,”  LAUDS and PRIME.

These poems, bros, do not disappoint.

An ear is so pleased by the sonorous openness of LAUDS’ first stanza: all the melody caught up in ‘shore’ and ‘door’ and ‘morning’ and ‘architecture’—’rub,’ ‘hum,’ ‘warmth,’ and ‘summer’ are not far behind. How effective the ‘I can forget’ refrain (strange! feels like pyrrhic & iamb to me, so quiet is the announcement of self) becomes, too, mostly as a result of its sincerity. This isn’t one of those pieces with a mop of black hair in front of its face, underfed, and therefore undermeaning: Black’s gambit is to write ‘Lord’ because he’s engaging some Lord, and, yes, can forget—what—to acknowledge, it seems. To engage what that acknowledgment might mean. Consider the profundity of

You give me morning, Lord, as you
give earthquake to all architecture 

—as I unpack it, the speaker is just a bit of foundation before the (potentially) blasting light—he’s got to live by housing that potential blast. Isn’t this deeply sorrowful? And isn’t this difficult to acknowledge? 

Beside the music, then (did I mention these are sonnets?), is Black’s very clear voice—I daresay vision, that standby impossibility in umpteen POEM-OF-THE-WEEK glossies—that, even if I question, I can’t help but appreciate. Maybe it’s for the sinking of the Pequod and M-D himself that I don’t believe the sea is a ‘machine without memory’—still, thanks, Black: bless the assertion of a poetic. And the unerringly lavish ‘You put that sugar/in the melon’s breath.’

In PRIME, everything (the ‘flat-footed dance,’ the skin’s drapery, even the bird between ribs, whatever shimmer) seems to point towards the tenuous, tender ‘stand’ in line nine—the earlier ‘gleam of sickness’ has found feet, and, as reader, I see the impasto of LAUDS spreading out against the sky of where this section is going. Really, then, this speaker’s is a mind like most of ours—with methods of forgetting, or at least displacement (the poem acts as a marker against forgetting, after all); an exteriority that realizes how much existence would have to shift to admit ‘Lord,’ the wind one sights, that ‘simple warmth of summer from afar.’

This poet’s mind is not like most of ours, however. And for the time I’ve spent with this, and will continue to spend with it, there is a celebration of (our own) inimitable voice, after which we should be striving.

POEM: Robert Frost’s “The Sound of Trees”

THE SOUND OF TREES

I wonder about the trees.
Why do we wish to bear
Forever the noise of these
More than another noise
So close to our dwelling place?
We suffer them by the day
Till we lose all measure of pace,
And fixity in our joys,
And acquire a listening air.
They are that that talks of going
But never gets away;
And that talks no less for knowing,
As it grows wiser and older,
That now it means to stay.
My feet tug at the floor
And my head sways to my shoulder
Sometimes when I watch trees sway,
From the window or the door.
I shall set forth for somewhere,
I shall make the reckless choice
Someday when they are in voice
And tossing so as to scare
The white clouds over them on.
I shall have less to say,
But I shall be gone.

Robert Frost

Reflecting on Glück

Since the 1968 birth of her inaugural collection, Firstborn, Louise Glück has been writing the poetry of modern myth.  Ararat (1992) tells a demotic mythology of the modern family, and Meadowlands (1997) chronicles the quiet displacement of a modern marriage alongside the interior love story of Homer’s Odyssey.  But Glück’s Pulitzer Prize winning collection, The Wild Iris, is able to make much more from a modern mythology.  She is loyal to her naturalistic trope, but cultivates a garden, a co-creation between gardener and nature, with which she tells the myth of the soul as it lives, dies , and cements the beauty of what goes beyond existing as a ‘self,’ or an individual.

The poet’s voice mixes with the voices of flowers, the morning, with an unnamed god, and with the voices of the dead.  In the title poem, we see an iris bulb’s return from a winter under the earth as a return from death:

You who do not remember
passage from the other world
I tell you I could speak again: whatever
returns from oblivion returns
to find a voice:

—the iris’ resurrection includes a push through the unbearable silence of frozen earth, and an entrance into something more than the state of selfhood.  The flower, reborn, is a soul that remembers what is outside of its daily self:

At the end of my suffering
there was a door.
Hear me out: that which you call death
I remember.

Besides existing as a powerful precursor to the sentiment that Jean Valentine called the ‘door in the mountain,’ these lines suggest an awakening beyond the usual trappings of life, beyond the pain of being a ‘self.’ Helen Vender has called this voice ‘archetypal,’ and ‘mysteriously significant . . . [one] of spiritual prophecy.’

It is this kind of high poetic that begins by suspending the reader in a hammock of eerie beauty until he is primed for the death blow that Glück rarely fails to deliver—one immediately thinks, for example, of the devastating closes in her “Mock Orange,” “The Red Poppy,” and “Telescope.” Those who call ourselves Glück’s ‘fans’ can become dependent on this sharp deliverance, and are left with a feeling of confusion when Glück drapes us, instead, in the rural dailiness of more and more cold winters, dog-walking, deep shade, and dinners with wine—this is the milieu of her most recent book, A Village Life. 

The tenor of A Village Life, to this end, undermines the force of the primal question Glück asks in The Wild Iris: ‘Is it enough/only to look inward?’  While The Wild Iris reminds us of what is greater than our daily struggle, Glück’s latest collection binds the reader further to the pain of being an aging body, a person who must stay alive every day; where The Wild Iris dazzles us with the desperate romance of natural existence, A Village Life cracks us over the head with the vulgarities of generic dissatisfaction, or the pain the poet finds in the commonness of a much cruder garden:

The fountain rises at the center of the plaza:
on sunny days, rainbows in the piss of the cherub.

The difference between these two collections is, after all, the difference between a spiritual text and a daily journal.  Both kinds of writing can be applauded, but for readers of poetry—those who attempt to access the deep heart’s core—which is more important? and as Virginia Woolf queried, which sort of text could we sink to the bottom of the sea with, contentedly?

POEM: Geoffrey Hill’s “The Imaginative Life”

THE IMAGINATIVE LIFE

Evasive souls, of whom the wise lose track,
Die in each night, who, with their day-tongues, sift
The waking-taste of manna or of blood;

The raw magi, part-barbarians,
Entranced by demons and desert frost,
By the irregular visions of a god,

Suffragans of the true seraphs. Lust
Writhes, is dumb savage and in their way
As a virulence natural to the earth.

Renewed glories batten on the poor bones;
Gargantuan mercies whetted by a scent
Of mortal sweat: as though the sleeping flesh

Adored by Furies, stirred, yawned, were driven
In mid-terror to purging and delight.
As though the dead had Finis on their brows.

Geoffrey Hill